My eyes opened to find u in darkness,
The halos of my faith lead me to your soul
You moved away leaving your tears to follow
Trying to trace those momentary icons,
Walking through all the thorns u laid to hurt me
Enjoying the sweetness of that pain I followed….
Standing alone in the path to zenith I looked around;
Looks of sarcasm all around, made me blind
Drowning in the guilt of the passion I chose,
Your eyes speaking about the unknown seasons,
Reading the words from your limpid heart
I searched for those dreams holding our hands.
Felt them perishing in the heat of my agony
With my reflections dying with them
I woke to the music of the new season to come
Holding me with its words of hopes and spirits
I moved along in this new wind of desire,
To find myself smiling in the mirror of tomorrow…
2 comments:
Thats the way you go girl... don't let anybody be in control of your happiness
have you ever tried your hand at Creative writing..You have a rare breed of literary finesse, too early to say its 'unparalled', but strikingly fresh, candid and jubilant.
I would love to apply a different attire now and try printing down a critique. But, fellow readers might perceive that as offensive, prejudiced and unsympathetic.
Keep peggin on... sharpen your phraseaology and who knows... a momentary bliss might avoke a hidden genius.
thomas
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