October 19, 2007

Stop Inspiring me!!!

I wrote this long back..I am publishing this as I wanted to compare the themes of my poems.I realise that everything revolves around a single inspiration.I hate to call it my inspiration as it left me bruises..I wish u could stop inspiring me from writing this.I want to write about things that would bring a beautiful smile of warmth not sarcasm....


My eyes opened to find u in darkness,

The halos of my faith lead me to your soul

You moved away leaving your tears to follow

Trying to trace those momentary icons,

Walking through all the thorns u laid to hurt me

Enjoying the sweetness of that pain I followed….

Standing alone in the path to zenith I looked around;

Looks of sarcasm all around, made me blind

Drowning in the guilt of the passion I chose,

Your eyes speaking about the unknown seasons,

Reading the words from your limpid heart

I searched for those dreams holding our hands.

Felt them perishing in the heat of my agony

With my reflections dying with them

I woke to the music of the new season to come

Holding me with its words of hopes and spirits

I moved along in this new wind of desire,

To find myself smiling in the mirror of tomorrow…

2 comments:

Riddhi said...

Thats the way you go girl... don't let anybody be in control of your happiness

Anonymous said...

have you ever tried your hand at Creative writing..You have a rare breed of literary finesse, too early to say its 'unparalled', but strikingly fresh, candid and jubilant.

I would love to apply a different attire now and try printing down a critique. But, fellow readers might perceive that as offensive, prejudiced and unsympathetic.

Keep peggin on... sharpen your phraseaology and who knows... a momentary bliss might avoke a hidden genius.

thomas