Dewdrops failed to whisper to me
Holding you in the warmth of my palm
arid past stay untouched in my eyes
My fingers shivered in holding you tight
swallowing the pain,I smiled at you;
Failing to see the gleam in your eyes
I recalled those dark shadows to guide me back
retracing my path in my teardrops
subliming the heartbeats in the rhytmn
I droped you to a blossoming bud
away from the deadly teary fog
just to see you smile and shine
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Fantastic poem!
Try to forget about it... It's really high time now...
On a less serious note(I wonder why they never say, "On a funny note"), let's write something about how you succeeded to trouble others with all your pranks... I can go over the grammar like before... :P
@Chakrum
Hehe High time?What do u think it was about ? ;)
Btw I couldnt figure of who u r ,Somebody I know very well though!
Somebody who knows you very well :) I thought my 'grammar' clue would give me away. Now, I think maybe 1.5 yrs weren't enough... :)
Btw, forgot to say in the previous comment that I loved the poem. I think I am right in thinking what it is about, if I am not than my bad :(
Hello, Ms. Bhadra,
Came across your blog!
cooling dew drops, Nice.
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My Goodness, unworthy I am.
Then why should I scrible?
I am justified
You are from my country
From my place of origin.
Boring? It is so?
I wave 'Good bye'
lovely poem and a lovely blog......................................
just amazing poem....!!!!!
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