February 18, 2010

Dew Drop!

Dewdrops failed to whisper to me
Holding you in the warmth of my palm
arid past stay untouched in my eyes
My fingers shivered in holding you tight
swallowing the pain,I smiled at you;
Failing to see the gleam in your eyes
I recalled those dark shadows to guide me back
retracing my path in my teardrops
subliming the heartbeats in the rhytmn
I droped you to a blossoming bud
away from the deadly teary fog
just to see you smile and shine

16 comments:

PrincessDipti said...

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MissHolly2 said...

Fantastic poem!

Chakrum said...

Try to forget about it... It's really high time now...

On a less serious note(I wonder why they never say, "On a funny note"), let's write something about how you succeeded to trouble others with all your pranks... I can go over the grammar like before... :P

Bhadra Nair said...

@Chakrum
Hehe High time?What do u think it was about ? ;)
Btw I couldnt figure of who u r ,Somebody I know very well though!

假日的 said...

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Chakrum said...

Somebody who knows you very well :) I thought my 'grammar' clue would give me away. Now, I think maybe 1.5 yrs weren't enough... :)

Btw, forgot to say in the previous comment that I loved the poem. I think I am right in thinking what it is about, if I am not than my bad :(

Joseph Valummel said...

Hello, Ms. Bhadra,

Came across your blog!
cooling dew drops, Nice.

Comment on Poetry
My Goodness, unworthy I am.
Then why should I scrible?

I am justified
You are from my country
From my place of origin.

Boring? It is so?

I wave 'Good bye'

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manpreet said...

lovely poem and a lovely blog......................................

Sharul said...

just amazing poem....!!!!!

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Balu Krishnan said...

Sweet poem chellu... Wondering who is the 'YOU'

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