My eyes opened to find u in darkness,
The halos of my faith lead me to your soul
You moved away leaving your tears to follow
Trying to trace those momentary icons,
Walking through all the thorns u laid to hurt me
Enjoying the sweetness of that pain I followed….
Standing alone in the path to zenith I looked around;
Looks of sarcasm all around, made me blind
Drowning in the guilt of the passion I chose,
Your eyes speaking about the unknown seasons,
Reading the words from your limpid heart
I searched for those dreams holding our hands.
Felt them perishing in the heat of my agony
With my reflections dying with them
I woke to the music of the new season to come
Holding me with its words of hopes and spirits
I moved along in this new wind of desire,
To find myself smiling in the mirror of tomorrow…
Thats the way you go girl... don't let anybody be in control of your happiness
ReplyDeletehave you ever tried your hand at Creative writing..You have a rare breed of literary finesse, too early to say its 'unparalled', but strikingly fresh, candid and jubilant.
ReplyDeleteI would love to apply a different attire now and try printing down a critique. But, fellow readers might perceive that as offensive, prejudiced and unsympathetic.
Keep peggin on... sharpen your phraseaology and who knows... a momentary bliss might avoke a hidden genius.
thomas